He returned a few minutes later with a suitcase. Jodi looked at the suitcase then a Rick questionably. As if reading her mind Rick said “I need to be around people I can trust so im getting out of town. Now you can have all the dick you want”. Rick grabbed his car keys and opened the front door. Before he left Jodi said “Son please!”. “you don’t get to call me that anymore.” Rick replied and left slamming the door behind him. Jodi fell to the floor and screamed as the last good thing in her life disappeared and she lied there crying.
Rick put his case in the trunk and drove off. He’d made arrangements to stay with his friend Katy for a while and no plans to see Jodi or this town again. Suddenly it felt like a great weight had been lifted as he passed the sign that said “You are now leaving Woodchip”.
Author’s Note:
I enjoyed writing this and am open to feedback. FEEDBACK not criticism. As I explained before I’m not interested in grammar complaints. I have a sequel in mind but I’m waiting to see how well this story goes down. In the mean time I’ve begun work on the next chapter of deep and lovely dark. Any thoughts or suggestions would be appreciated. Hope you enjoyed Son’s Revenge.