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Check Out Girl — part 2
Liam and Maddison had been together as a proper couple for eight weeks now and things were certainly becoming hotter between the pair of them.
He was hoping that at some point soon she would consent to him taking her virginity. However, after the things she had told him about her previous boyfriend, and his expectations, he was content to wait until she was ready.
It had become their normal routine for Maddison to come round to the flat straight from her shift at the supermarket on the Friday. So, it was no surprise to Liam to find her there when he got in from work at just before six o’clock.
Not particularly wanting to cook she had thought about ordering in but quickly decided she should wait until her boyfriend was home, to see if he agreed.
“Hey babe. I thought we might have a take away tonight. What do you think?” she called out as soon as she heard the front door close.
“Sounds great, what do you fancy?”
“I don’t really mind. But not pizza, we had that last time.”
“You choose. I’m going to shower.”
Giving it some thought Maddi eventually ordered a Chinese take-away for them and then settled back to wait for Liam to join her.
Sitting on the couch she had the television on but she wasn’t really watching it. Instead, she sat and reflected on her decision, still sure it was what she wanted.
Their delivery arrived forty-five minutes later and, opening a bottle of wine, the two of them sat down to eat. Apart from responding to the usual questions she let the meal pass her by as she sat and reflected on her choice.
After they had finished and cleared the remains of their dinner away, she cuddled up to him on the sofa to watch a film.
“Liam?” the movie had only been playing for a few minutes when she whispered in his ear, her lips nibbling at his neck.
“Yes babe?” he struggled to keep his attention on the screen as her tongue distracted him.
“I’ve been on the pill for a month now.”
For a moment he failed to register exactly what his girlfriend had just said to him as she sat, grinning at him, waiting for his response.
“You’ve what.” Liam suddenly sat up and turned to look at her, his face a mixture of surprise and expectation.
Maddi giggled “I went on the pill a few weeks ago.”
He struggled to say something sensible “So… err… you want to… I mean you…”
Leaning in to kiss him tenderly she let her lips press against his while her tongue darted teasingly into his mouth.
Then she sat back and fixed her gaze on him, her fingers twisting nervously together. She was certain this was what she wanted, to give herself to him completely.
“I think I’m ready. I’m in love with you Liam and I want you to take my virginity.”
Swallowing hard Liam could feel his dick growing to its full size and tenting out his jeans.
“I love you to Maddison, you know that. But you’re sure about this? I mean it’s a big step.”
She swallowed nervously and nodded “I’m sure. I want you to… to fuck me.”
Liam kissed her, pulling her into his arms as hers slid around his neck. It was gentle at first, their lips barely touching, then slowly he let his tongue delve into her mouth to toy against hers.
She simply groaned expectantly when his hand moved up to cup her breast and caress it through the thin material of her top.
“You… you will be gentle… won’t you?” Maddison pulled back for a moment to whisper to him, her eyes never leaving his.
“Mmhhhmm…” he kissed her again, “I promise.”
Her response was urgent, her fingers twisting in his hair as she returned his kisses ardently, the dampness between her thighs growing with every second.
“Take me to bed Liam…. Please. I want you to love me.” she finally gasped, desperate to finally have him inside her.
Rising up off the sofa he held out his hand to her, gently pulling her to her feet and leading her through to the master bedroom. Following a step behind she could feel her pulse racing, her stomach tightening with anticipation and her heart fluttering.
Once they stood by the bed Maddison slid into his arms, kissing him passionately, as he started to slowly undress her. Peeling her top off over her head Liam discarded it onto the floor.
Running his hands down her body he began to unfasten her jeans and, with her assistance, push them down her legs to pool around her feet.
Blushing she stepped away and kicked her jeans aside, now standing in just her underwear in front of her boyfriend as he hurriedly started to strip off as well.
Struggling to help him unbutton his shirt she ended up almost ripping it off of him before unzipping his jeans to yank them, and his boxer shorts, down so he was standing before her as naked as she was.
“Oh my god it’s… so… big.” She gasped softly as she wrapped her fingers around his swollen manhood, “I’m not sure….. I can manage… if it will… fit.”
While Liam wasn’t the biggest, he certainly wasn’t the smallest either. With a solid length of 8 inches and a girth of around 5″ he had never had any complaints from the few girlfriends he had bedded in the past.
“Don’t worry Maddison. It’ll be fine I promise.” Drawing her back towards him his lips found hers again, “I’ll go as slow as you want.”
Fumbling at her bra he struggled to undo it and, eventually, Maddi stopped him and did it for him. Reaching behind her back she grinned as she unhooked the strap and peeled it away from her small breasts.
Shyly she avoided his gaze and hooking her fingers in her little white panties she slid them down her shapely thighs giving a man a view of her naked body and shaven sex for the first time ever.
Her small 34A cup breasts were firm, topped with dark areola and hard little nipples, and stood high and proud on her chest. Her body tapered in slightly to her trim waist and then flared out again to her slender hips and pert rounded bottom.
“God you’re beautiful.” Liam gasped, his eyes widening as he saw her nude for the very first time.
“No, I’m too skinny.” She bit her lower lip and protested softly at his comment.
“Uh-uh, you’re absolutely perfect.” He pulled her towards the bed, gently guiding her down onto the duvet.
Maddi lay trembling as he gently caressed her body, running his hands over her breasts he took his time to tease her nipples into firm peaks before lowering his head to take them into his mouth.
“Oh Liam… Oh god…. Ohhhhhh!” Maddi gasped with delight as he suckled on her swollen sensitive teats.
While the sensations he was creating in her were familiar they were far stronger than anything she had experienced before. Her eyes closed as she moaned softly, one hand reaching to pull his lips harder against her swollen buds.
She knew he was waiting for her to stop him as he slid his hand downward across her flat stomach, his fingers outstretched reaching towards her womanhood. And for a moment her body stiffened, her natural reflex taking over until she made herself relax.
“Please… don’t stop.” her sigh made him shudder with expectation.
This was what she wanted though, for him to make her a complete woman.
Gasping softly, she shivered with anticipation, as his fingers found her slit, touching her sex for the very first time.
“Liam….” She murmured, her fingers twisting in his hair as she spread her legs for him.
Maddison trembled the dampness between her thighs increasing as her boyfriend traced a fingertip along her cleft, lightly pressing it between her outer lips and searching for her clit.
The more he teased her the more she felt the need growing inside her, the embers of her pleasure starting to glow as he stoked her fire.
“Oh yes… oh Liam… oh fuck…. Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh!” she jerked, her hands clutching at him tighter while he toyed with her sensitive button.
Teasingly he slipped a finger into her dripping hole and she felt her body respond urgently to his intimate touch. Growing even wetter she shuddered, moaning softly and clinging to him as he wormed his digit deeper and started to finger-fuck her.
Maddison had often played with herself when she was alone in her bed, imagining that Liam was touching her, but this was infinitely better now he was doing it for real. She hardly dared breathe in case he stopped what he was doing.
“Yes… oh yes… oh god Liam….” Squirming as he worked his finger up inside her slit, she cried out softly.
Her juices flooded over his hand as she quivered with pleasure, his lips slowly kissing his way down from her breasts, over her abdomen and onto her thighs.
“What… what are you d… doing?” startled she hesitantly went to stop him.
“Uh-uh.” Ignoring her he continued downward, tracing his tongue up along her inner thighs towards her yearning sex.
“Oh fuck… what are….. ohhhhhhhh….. ooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.”
Closing her eyes Maddison sighed contentedly and opened her legs wider, allowing him to run his tongue along the length of her dripping slit, arching her back up off the bed when his mouth found her swollen clitoris.
“Fuck…. fuck… oh fuck… Liam… oh god… oh… my…. god!” her hands tightened in the sheet; her knuckles white as he began to lick greedily at her pussy.
As soon as he began to eat her Maddi knew she was going to cum. The feelings he was creating in her were far more intense than anything she had ever experienced in her life.
Eager to climax before he took her cherry she squirmed, grabbing his head and pushing his mouth against her wet slit as he started to probe into her cunt with his tongue.
Working it around and lapping up her tasty cream it wasn’t very long before he had her moaning with delight as he drove her closer to her first orgasm.
“Yes… oh yes… yes, yes… oh shit…. oh god Liam… don’t stop…. don’t….. stop!” her thighs came together to trap his head between them as she urged him to continue.